I Am Being Myself Poem by annonymous lost

I Am Being Myself

Rating: 4.5


i am.... helpless
i cant control the things i do
i hear the comments people make
i feel no reaction
i say i am alright when i am at my breaking point
i am.... different

i am... full of woe
i cant control the things i say
i hear people having fun
i feel left out
i say i will kill myself but no one listens
i am.... not the only one

i was born on a Wednesday
i was so bright and talented
i am so lonely and lost
i am only one person and that person is myself

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Ching 03 January 2009

very unique...i like the mood you use in your poem, a calm hopelessness of gloom that seems almost tranquil in a shadowed way...sometimes i feel exactly the same way... always, lc

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