I Am Lost Poem by TARA.. Star

woooooooow, you just said what i feel, lost lost lost

as i read this poem i can feel the fear of being lost. but in life our roads we take will always have bumps in it or detours in which makes us swerve from our paths but do not fear for we all eventually return to them. i really do like this poem.

Allaha will lead you, from one race to the next, with little if any breath, so you wont cry...iip

very nice potent and feeling lines there did a nice job at communicating the feelings.. its ten from me cheers

Amen, my lovely poet, that was very evocative and strong piece fine piece of poetry, anyone can relate to, you have put your heart and soul in it lovely :)

Very easy diction A nice and small poem, that can enjoy every one. A normal reader does not need a dictionary when going thru this poem. Keep it up Nooruddeen

a nice poem, full of wisdom, and images.well done.

it is so emotional..! i like it...

Discover the allah in yourself...you will see all the doubts melt. and u will regain your confidence back. a sad poem....hopelessness portraied well though

i like the part that has hope.... another race.. as you say it...