I Am Lost Poem by TARA.. Star

I Am Lost

Rating: 5.0


I am lost in darkness....
dont know what to follow?
O' allah help me please,
&let me out from this sorrow


Why peroid of waiting is so long?
I'm forgetting, from where i belong!
i'm confused in between
For what i actually long? ?


So many questions, mark my face,
I'm speechless, without any trace
Is that all what i deserve? ?
Or its just a beggining for another race? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shweta Advani 17 May 2009

hey buddy gud write.. the answers r on their way..coz u have started the first step of askin questions which so many people never embark upon...just keep the faith....n look to God..: -) 10++++++

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Darkness Everywhere 17 May 2009

really good poem 10 ++++

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Sandra Martyres 17 May 2009

Nice write...do not worry the answers will come as you keep asking the right questions...We are all born with innate strengths to work out the answers for ourselves.10

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Abida Rahman 17 May 2009

keep making dua3, keep praying... inshallah the answers will come clear... Allah never puts you through something you can't handle, be patient. nice write. Salam

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 17 May 2009

Amen, thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing

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Nooruddeen Mm 28 May 2009

Very easy diction A nice and small poem, that can enjoy every one. A normal reader does not need a dictionary when going thru this poem. Keep it up Nooruddeen

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Blue Eyes 27 May 2009

a nice poem, full of wisdom, and images.well done.

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it is so emotional..! i like it...

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Shekhar Joshi 24 May 2009

Discover the allah in yourself...you will see all the doubts melt. and u will regain your confidence back. a sad poem....hopelessness portraied well though

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Ritika Nehra 24 May 2009

i like the part that has hope.... another race.. as you say it...

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