Thursday, May 24, 2007

I Am Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m crumbling from within
My minds in a continuous spin,
Round and around it goes
I’m great at hiding so no one knows
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Hopeless Heart
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David Taylor 24 May 2007

Dear Heather, the poem is very good and in my opinion communicates the feelings so well and....being your self is the only thing thing to be that brings happiness, no point to try being someone elses idea of who you are, or should be. Tell all those doubts to shut up and live beautifully like your poetry. David

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