Thursday, October 11, 2012

I Am Rain Comments

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I emerge from the slithering vague,
My weeps sprinkle placid droplets to the atmosphere,
And sometimes, I outburst like a bundle of plague,
All the way, I tinkle the saturating hemisphere.
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Briana Renn
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Ency Bearis 11 October 2012

A wonderful cogitations indulge to beautiful simile, great write. Keep up the good work. And, it rhymes you are rain - Briana Renn, rhymes as can be.

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