Hallie Luster

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I Am Selfish. - Poem by Hallie Luster

I am selfish for breaking the promise to you,
Letting my urges take control,
I am sorry,
I just hope,
that you will forgive me because,
I am selfish.

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  • (5/6/2011 1:22:00 PM)

    Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, February 6, 2012

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