I Can'T Wait To Meet You Comments

i like it~ but the one thing i sorta dislike is that it implies fate.... i dont believe in fate but i do believe in cause and effect, i suppose thats good enough

Wow wonderful peom, can't wait to read more from you

i love this poem..u will sure have your true love soon

this is an excellent poem..well written -w/ great emotion.. keep looking..u'll find her..

nice poem dave.....some day you will find her...heh.... <3, Nia

nicely written, what a good poem, i really liked it, keep on writting my friend

I like the 'chorus' - like repetition of the second stanza and the easy warmth you convey throughout this rather wistful poem. I detect also, a faint smile in your final line, which appeals. Congratulations on your first post. Look forward to more. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥