I Cannot Decide... Poem by Devanshu Patel

I Cannot Decide...

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Morning Reflections! ! !

I cannot decide...

I can not decide
should I be happy or not
With this growing age....?

I can not decide
Has (the) statue of liberty*
brought me true freedom?

I cannot decide
Is it love that unite us
With our kin or needs....?

I cannot decide
What should we love for: to gain
something or to give?

I cannot decide
should I respect my wife for:
(her) devotion or love?

© Devanshu Patel
11/6/2018
Chicago

Tuesday, November 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: reflection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
* The Statue Of Liberty...here stands for the USA. I truly respect and love America as all citizens of the US do. This refers to my pain and loneliness I feel at heart, being away from my family and friends who are there in India. And Freedom here deals with heart and not body.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhipsa Panda 06 November 2018

A beautiful poem expressing your emotions for your loved ones....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2018

This is a beautiful poem having insightful depiction through dilemma with question tag. The answer is at poets hand which is best to accept. Thanks for sharing.

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Devanshu Patel

Devanshu Patel

Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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