Human Poem by Devanshu Patel

Human

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When shall we learn to know
People around us?
Not by their name
But as ‘human' same.
When shall we learn to love
People around us?
Not by their caste
But as ‘human' cast.
When shall we learn to see
People around us?
Not by their colors
But as ‘human brothers'.
When shall we learn to deal
People around us?
Not with their race
But embrace all with grace.
Because,
Differ may the name
Like earring, ring or chain
But we must remember, ‘the gold' is same.

We must remember,
‘The five elements' are the same.

Friday, March 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: human being
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Concept of Panchmahabhuta...That we all are created from the same five(Panch)elements(Mahabhuta) like Earth(Prithvi) , Water(Jal) , Fire(Agni) , Air(Vayu)and Space(Akash)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Excellent poem Devanshu Tank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Bharati Nayak 27 March 2018

Meaning of these lines are- - 1: Om, May All become Happy, 2: May All be Free from Illness. 3: May All See what is Auspicious, 4: May no one Suffer. 5: Om Peace, Peace, Peace.

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Devanshu Patel 28 March 2018

Namaskar Bharti ji! 🙏🙏🙏 Many many thanks from the bottom of my heart! For your valuable comments and the deep religious insight you have shown by quoting one of the Shanti Mantras from our Great Vedas...these are not mere words...I really mean it..THANKS.

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Saniya Galeyeva 27 March 2018

The poem I really need these days. Education, abikities, race, caste are not the differences which should devide us into inferior and superiour as all people are equal.

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Devanshu Patel 28 March 2018

Hearty thanks dear Saniya for not only visiting my page but also for the time you have spend to think over it and showing your true concern for mankind by giving your valuable comment for it. Stay blessed and also connected with your precious comments in future...

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Valsa George 20 July 2019

Men are essentially the same with almost similar cravings, interests and traits! We may be known by different names, we may have different religious practices, we may be citizens of different countries and climes. But these differences should not pose as barriers in loving or accepting others as we are all human and are born as children of God! A great message of universal brotherhood! A 10

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Gajanan Mishra 22 February 2019

Beautiful write, the only truth panchamahabhuta.

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Pallab Chaudhury 05 January 2019

A very nice poem, in deed... giving value to humanity... It's a nice experience too, to go through your poems, dear poet. With best wishes, PC

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 December 2018

Differ may the name Like earring, ring or chain But we must remember, ‘the gold' is same. What beautiful words! You have brought out Upanishadic truth in these three lines. that the soul is the same in all life. The beauty of this poem lies in its simplicity also apart from its profound truth.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 December 2018

It brilliantly expresses in detail through questions on how we should maintain relations and treat our fellow human beings. The magnificent thoughts embedded in this piece of art boil.down to the core of our existence. If we will put into.action these beautiful thoughts, the world will be a better place. Beautifully and cleverly written.

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Devanshu Patel

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Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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