Shannon Nicole

Rookie (03-30-91 / Oak Park, IL)

I Could.. But Then.. - Poem by Shannon Nicole

I could say that I was feeling alright,
But then I'd be lying.
I could say that I was feeling distant,
Because that's all I know that's right.
I could say I was feeling awake,
But I know that I'm really asleep.
I could say that I was breathing fairly,
But I know I'd lose my breath at any minute now.
I could say that my heart was beating slowly,
But I only knew it was beating real fast.
I could say I haven't been smiling,
But you'd read my mind and know I was.
I could say that my eyes have darkened,
But I know you'd look at me say 'liar'.
I know you look at me and think I'm someone that's different,
But if you really look at me..
You'll know I'm really the same.

(I lost train of thought..)


Comments about I Could.. But Then.. by Shannon Nicole

  • Romeo Della Valle (12/28/2009 8:27:00 PM)


    These are true feelings not coming from your barren lips, maybe, but from the bottom of your heart, well penned, keep it up, you are in the right track in this site,10++++HAPPY NEW YEAR to you and family, God Bless you! Love and Peace, Romeo (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 28, 2009



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