James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Thursday, May 14, 2009

I Dance, In Sound, Your Mind..Is Music Comments

Rating: 5.0

Powerless, I weave your very, your own web
around your nouns, my verbs turned pro, into.
Puzzled then, your Leaf, it shakes the wind.
I sit on top, envy with green, your back, words.
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William Stoneberger 18 May 2009

you have quite an interesting style....almost like e.e. cummings...think I'll have to read more to decide if I really like it or not...definitely keep it up though...interested in seeing where it continues to take you...peace & poetics...William

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Bright Rose 17 May 2009

that was really lovely to read, great music and words

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Carol Gall 14 May 2009

absolutely beautiful poetry sings

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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