I Dance, In Sound, Your Mind..Is Music Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

I Dance, In Sound, Your Mind..Is Music

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Powerless, I weave your very, your own web
around your nouns, my verbs turned pro, into.
Puzzled then, your Leaf, it shakes the wind.
I sit on top, envy with green, your back, words.
The first thing you pushed inword on me, was..your
bottom that vibrates me, it's why I cry...You fav'es me
now, in play, all day and night my pride..
Fingerless, I paint a picture, on your bottom dweller, it lays
in your refolded petals, thighs only come to life, when the
cricket sleeps.
At the end of the rainbow...I again, climb out of your pot.
the gold is no longer one tasty nugget, but a mild of tast salty wave.
We left the crown at the edge of your world, Oceanus.
In it's one good purple claw is the bread upon which, it carries,
your ripples of pleasure, consumed.....drinking butter..
I await the sun, to fall, while my asparagus, harvests destinies
swollowed beat, growing pink one spark at a time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Stoneberger 18 May 2009

you have quite an interesting style....almost like e.e. cummings...think I'll have to read more to decide if I really like it or not...definitely keep it up though...interested in seeing where it continues to take you...peace & poetics...William

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Bright Rose 17 May 2009

that was really lovely to read, great music and words

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Carol Gall 14 May 2009

absolutely beautiful poetry sings

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