I Do Remember Poem by me poet yeps poet

I Do Remember

Rating: 4.8


Such beauty in so few words
never composed never heard
Ii still remember those days gone by
when we grasped each other
as we passed by

Never heard
never seen
my, O my
yet those days
I remember too
loving was the life of you

nothing clasped
nothing held
‘ twas simply love in thin air
now I remember those days gone by
why don't you recall

O why, O tell me why
don't they come by, perhaps
'tis dementia still
it will not only you
but my memories kill

yet I do remember you still
some day
one day
remember me you will

Monday, January 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,lovers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard Snyder 04 January 2016

I love this poem! Powerful collection of words. Impressive! !

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 January 2016

thank u but u lowered my rating 10/10 to 9.5 by not awarding ty tc gb comments make a difference BS

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 January 2016

Beauty of few words still we remember in love. Very fantastic poem drafted and shared really. Wise sharing.10

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me poet yeps poet 15 November 2022

THNX KM

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me poet yeps poet 15 November 2022

THANK YOU KM MISSING YOU SO MUCH

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 January 2016

and may I continue to bow before you you are the master of poetry I its slave ty tc gb hny 2106 is till onnnnnnnnnnnnn on my poem REMEMBER ME some POETS comment on this poem. .''''''You have quite a unique writing skill, combining beautiful words and fine writing with a raw, clever, realistic wit. Sometimes remembering is simply too hard....''''.

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