Tuesday, June 18, 2019

I Don't Love The Cloud Comments

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I watch the cloud
Slowly passing over
The patch of land
Where I stand
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 June 2019

One doesn't love cloud when cloud doesn't bear rain. You have astutely delineated this poem having this theme. It may be cited.....I don't love the cloud It does not bear rain For the mortals in this Scorching heat I wish it should bring Rain and thunder for the Parched earth or death It should meet Brilliant poem. TFS.

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