I don’t need a god to tell me to not kill
To not steal
To not cheat.
I don’t need a god to make me hate
To fight
To kill
I don’t need a god to be pure
To be true
To be moral
I don’t need a god, an ultimate consequence, or reward.
All I need is my mind. I am my own God.
This is nothing but an intense ride within the confines of your mind, so thank you for letting me have a free ticket on.
You may your heart and your soul as much or even more than your mind. There is indeed a divine spark in each and everyone of us, try to close your eyes and listen. Considering what is there beyond our five senses and realising how our five senses tend to tell us not the complete truth (horizon, rainbow etc) you may want to really reflect more and search for Truth. Religious people who are arrogant about their believes are indeed furhter away from any truth than anybody else. In the face of the Truth, humbleness and peace of mind will be yours. You are the start of a wonderful journey. keep on thinking about this topic with an open mind and all the best wishes
wow, every line power-packed. incredible intensity there. awesome job. :) but i'll bet a little offending to a lot of ppl.: P i kinda disagree w/ you, but it is nevertheless, an excellent poem. :)
Very wise words for one so young, a lot of people will find your work too much truth, but don't let that stop you.Some things need to be said.And you say them well thanks
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I would like to translate this poem
i love the energy in this poem, the truth speaking out from you i do too believe in myself as a god or an individual. people dont need a god, they need themselves.