I Dream You Float Comments

''Floating dreams, you shine my love and tossed I am too deep but also red my heart you beat, '' excellent lyric poem, lovely to read 10/10/10

Crying, 'Yet, O yea, and when you Come with shy soft, rounded moon, my burning cheeks and my eyes are fevered, 'Iris, brightest pupil. As sunlight on the crowded river dream our stream of streams........... moon by hope of dream when resolute wholeness trembles by gleams of rays yet buries the darkness deep below yet from within to beneath by stream, wonder awes by delight of gleams, fantastic yet ingenious by glory of gleams endeared upon, yet a marvel of unique genre,10++++, thanks for sharing

nice to read... lovely and worth remembering.. sweet... Maia