I Empty My Mind Of Figures Poem by timmy conway

I Empty My Mind Of Figures



And fill it with prayers
I walk the gree avenue
Guarded by the beech and chestnut
Walk over golden leaves
That wold outdo Solomon

I Empty My Mind Of Figures
Tuesday, February 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: walking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 07 February 2017

Welcome to Poem Hunter! I believe you meant WOULD instead of WOLD in that last line. You have made the title into part of the poem itself, in other words, the title is really the first line of the poem. I don't remember ever seeing that done before. Very unusual. You might consider adding the title again as the first line. The poem itself is very nice, and the picture is beautiful, although it appears to be sideways. I have had that trouble before (with pictures appearing sideways) and I usually have to just use a different picture.

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