Jose' Antonio Orellana Artolozaga


I Had A Private Talk - Poem by Jose' Antonio Orellana Artolozaga

I had a private talk—
With your eyes
Last night and
While listening to the
Theory I rendered
They fluttered
Anticipation
Like wish-for-coins
Cast in a fountain where
Illusions glisten
Afterglow dewdrops fresh
And pure coating of
Solace o’er the heart
Budding dreamy-eyed
In a hushing light, a kiss
Blushed forth your plight
©2011 j.a.o.a.
©2011 Jose' Antonio Orellana Artolozaga


Comments about I Had A Private Talk by Jose' Antonio Orellana Artolozaga

  • Sylva Portoian (12/11/2011 5:19:00 AM)


    very romantic
    'I had A private talk with your Eyes'
    I hope you have real love and not false
    As most men plan
    Till they get and
    Far away they run...

    Sylva, from her eyes
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 11, 2011



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