Carissa McBride

Rookie (8/30/1992 / Toledo Ohio)

I Hate That I Love You - Poem by Carissa McBride

I love you so much and you can't even see,
That every time u look away, it's like sticking a knife into me.
I want you so much,
But you want me so little.
Your so conceited,
And I hate it so much.
But everytime you smile,
My knees give, my hearts melts,
But you dont love you, so why should i stay?
Those pills are too slow,
Just like your desire to love me.
The knife hurts so bad,
And the gun in the drawer is calling.
Maybe you'll read this after i leave,
But i doubt it.
You'll probally laugh.
I'll cock the gun,
Jessica, my friend, i love you,
and boy, i hope you remember me.
I put it in my mouth,
I pull the trigger,
God forgive me.

written by bleeding mascara


Comments about I Hate That I Love You by Carissa McBride

  • (1/31/2009 8:06:00 AM)


    love it great images <3 (Report) Reply

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  • (9/25/2008 11:01:00 AM)


    wow all ur poems are so well wirtten and u can feel the emotion in them! i love them all please keep writing! ! they are all very good. (Report) Reply

  • (8/27/2008 8:53:00 AM)


    i can really feel this.



    fluffnuts =]
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  • (10/9/2007 1:38:00 PM)


    nice write.....i cant rate this poem though for it has to do with the ultimate sin (taking ones own life) ....i sure hope these thoughts you script are not true but for reading only.....i wish you the best if these words are true....my prayers go out to you dear......and your heart will mend...trust me....read my poems........keep your chin up friend......all will work out....that i promise! !

    Brian~
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 9, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 15, 2011


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