Carissa McBride

Rookie (8/30/1992 / Toledo Ohio)

Love - Poem by Carissa McBride

love is beuatiful
yet horrible
it makes you
or breaks you
keeps together or tears you apart.
it's life or death.
and as i look at love long lost
i stand tall
broken and shattered
heart weathered
i pick up the pieces
of a broken heart
a heart shattered by rejection
humilliation
and defeat
i stand tall
tears streaming down my face
and i walk on.
written by bleeding mascara


Comments about Love by Carissa McBride

  • (9/28/2007 10:09:00 AM)


    We walk on....heartbroken.....thats so true. I think all of us can see in this poem a mirror of our own pasts. Well written! (Report) Reply

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  • (9/28/2007 10:06:00 AM)


    A painful ending, From a pleasurable begining, Excellent write Carissa.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 28, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 11, 2011


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