Saturday, March 7, 2009

I Have A Dream Comments

Rating: 4.9

I have a dream,
That justice will be done.
I have a dream,
That we will shine like the sun.
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Katie Goodrum
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Gordon Wilkinson 08 March 2009

I enjoyed the dream - but once again there is the use of repeating lines and starting line the same way hurts it - still its a wonderful dream - 9

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