eduardo perez

I Have Fallen In Love - Poem by eduardo perez

i have fallen in love
with the girl that
is really nice she
don't think am stupid
when i make jokes
like my friends those.
she smile and make
me freeze like ice.
then she does it again
and i think 'i fall for it twice.'
she touches my heart
just by saying 'hi'
and i don't know what to say
to not make me sound dumm.
what she makes me feel is
hard to explain is like
some one asking how
does water taste like?
this is how i feel about
you all the time
every day every night.
Sunday to Saturday
month by month
that passes all i think
is about my love.

Comments about I Have Fallen In Love by eduardo perez

  • Emma Adamyan (5/24/2012 1:01:00 PM)

    fuuuuuuuuuuuuuull of the greatest feelings. looks like the first love`s poem... it grabs ur mind when u take it with all mistake and u consider them like a part of that creation... very tender, still passionate, juz lovely! (Report) Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (1/28/2010 10:22:00 PM)

    Great confession of love, I have been there many times and I don't know If I still will be there again, nothing to be ashame about...Your honesty proves to be the steppingstone of your talent as a new poet...Welcome to are in the right track and site, PH, you got what it takes, talent...keep it up...10+++Love and Peace... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 28, 2010

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