I Have You... Poem by Abhijit Surve

I Have You...

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes I think I died within,
Burning ashes reduced to nothing..
Plans and aims are no more sound,
Targets and goals no longer bound..

For hours, I just keep wondering,
My body and soul keep shivering..
The passion within is crystallized,
My sentiments are now criticized..

Lost the sense of good and bad,
Sabotaged the ideas, I ever had..
My behavior has turned cowardish,
My gains have all turned selfish..

God too is playing hide and seek,
Scope of hope is visibly bleak..
My voice is echoing stupidity,
Loudness is mocking serenity..

All tangibility's about to burst,
Things have gone from bad to worst..
I thought this journey had nothing new,
Just by the next bend I found you,

You are the reflection of my zeal,
It's your affection that does reveal..
Helping me back on my feet, today,
Close to my heart forever you'd stay..

I know at times I've made you cry,
But steal everyday for me you try..
One new deed to bring back my smile,
One sweet talk to make my mood agile..

You've taught me the sense of true hope,
I can see more with an increased scope..
There's more to life then a failure or two,
Every failure is a success when I have you....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maitreyee Joshi 03 August 2009

good, you have someone so caring and patient.

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Mary Joy Lumanog 07 August 2009

I know the feeling..despite failures and hopelessness we still hold on to something..a hope that there's a person; ; whom you can lean on...it's so passionate and very touching..you made my heart shiver and I cried. Keep writing

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Christina Phan 04 August 2009

Heart touching poem 10+++

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Ruth Walters 04 August 2009

We are all different under the stars and yet so much the same. We all fear we've failed, yearn to be praised, yearn to be accepted and loved and you found it all in her arms.....lucky boy. Ruthy: -))

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Sonya Florentino 04 August 2009

last line says it all....nothing else matters.....

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Marieta Maglas 03 August 2009

touching poem.................

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