Monday, February 22, 2021

I Hope I Die Looking At The Sun Comments

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Folks I know, are disappearing one by one.
They turn to gold in their autumn years
Wise on life's lessons
unable to avoid the inevitable.
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john robson 23 February 2021

i am moving house and found my old poetry box of scribbles and one liners. the peom I hope i die seeing the sun i wrote in 3 hrs having found four lines i had put together back in '96 having slept on it i made an ammendment to the poem. hopefully for the better.

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john robson 23 February 2021

i never passed any english or literature exams. Years ago I tried to write a few poems but in my opinion failed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 February 2021

A beautiful and well conveyed poem on death. Yes, death is inevitable.

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