Sunday, July 23, 2017

I Knew Her Comments

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I knew her when
She learned her letters;
She liked me too.
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Francie Lynch
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Practicing Poetess 24 July 2017

Francie, this is the first I've read of you, and I very much enjoyed it. I like poems that make you think, make you wonder about possibilities. Did she hide her true self from you so well, all along? Did she change? Did you simply outgrow her? I had a friend, once, and we were like two peas in a pod- - but I grew and she didn't, and eventually our differences made us grow apart. Sad, but true. Thank you for capturing this so well.

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Francie Lynch

Francie Lynch

Monaghan, Ireland
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