I Live On The Other Side Of My Own Loneliness Comments

There is always your Angel-guardian shining like a gem! you are never alone.

This strikes as a perfect poem. Its brevity enhances it; more lines would dilute the impact of those first 4 lines which say everything necessary. I love the VOLTA in line 4. Just when we think the speaker has found a haven in his dreams, he tells us with steely stoicism they too abandon him to solitude. And so his life is two lanes: Loneliness and Solitude. This is indeed an existential crisis.