Friday, March 9, 2007

I'Ll Drink My Whiskey Straight Comments

Rating: 5.0

You're wearing down my resistance
No matter how hard I fight
You snagged that little piece of me
That unravels me at night
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Sara Turner
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Chris Mendros 09 March 2007

Powerful. Flows well and rhymes come off natural, unforced. Sing-songy feel lends an ironic contrast to the dead-serious subject matter. Nice work.

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Scarborough, Ontario Canada
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