Wednesday, October 21, 2009

I Lost The Music Of My Poetry Comments

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I LOST THE MUSIC OF MY POETRY

I lost the music of my poetry
I tried to hear it again
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Shalom Freedman
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Rakesh Bedi 22 October 2009

Dissatisfaction is what you talk about......from satisfaction to dissasisfaction n vice-versa....careful friend; they all are vicious circles to entrap us.....regards

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Pedro Cescon 22 October 2009

Mmm, perhaps, and only perhaps, the sounds you would recognize as music really are not present in your poem. However, the sounds you can produce with your work may be your very own personal music, eh? Aren't you in need of looking inside of you and distinguish what is the music you are searching for and what is your own precious song?

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Patti Masterman 21 October 2009

I disagree. I can hear your soul singing even from here. If our mind has too many mirrors; sometimes we peer long and hard, thinking that none of these are the true reality; but one is: that one that's always watching everything.

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