I Love A Girl Poem by audrina lucero

I Love A Girl



there this girl
i love so much
but she dont feels the same for me
and it make me sad and sometimes cry
cause all i do is thinking of her
lips, kiss, eyes,
and she dating all the wrong people cause
they are hurting her
and i just want her to know
if she be wit me i will never hurt her
because i love her
and it is werid because i never felt
like this about a girl
i just want to be with her
for ever and ever
intell i die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 24 June 2008

The grammar needs some help here. That would improve the writing but not enough to make it a poem I could recommend. It is simple and clear but not much else here to warrant reading. It is more like a diary entry than a poem. GW62

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