Tuesday, June 24, 2008

I Love A Girl Comments

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there this girl
i love so much
but she dont feels the same for me
and it make me sad and sometimes cry
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audrina lucero
girl Dating hurting
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Greenwolfe 1962 24 June 2008

The grammar needs some help here. That would improve the writing but not enough to make it a poem I could recommend. It is simple and clear but not much else here to warrant reading. It is more like a diary entry than a poem. GW62

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