The first time i fell in love,
i fell so hard it didn't hurt.
The smiling numbness, an all-time high.
and i kept climbing up and up and up into oblivion,
into heaven.
Blinded by the lights of now,
and the never-ending loop of infinity,
Till three words changed my life forever.
Three words she was to return with four,
but thought them best unsaid.
Four words that could save a life,
i love you too.
But my words hung there like phantom laundry,
evaporated like cologne,
and left it's scent in silence.
Three words that would scarcely graze my tongue again,
i and love and you.
But my words hung there like phantom laundry, evaporated like cologne, and left it's scent in silence. these last verses of your poem is especially very poetic my dear poet....... rejection, you have pictured very well in a poetic fashion.. tony
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I would like to translate this poem
Love your word choice- -very original and effective! ! ! I want to read more of your work! 10