Tuesday, May 5, 2009

I Love You, Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

The stars in the sky are shining so bright,
You held me in your arms so warm and so tight...

Feeling your heartbeat,
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Cemya Barnillo
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Ency Bearis 05 May 2009

Sometimes that's what love does..to betray you... A good write...wonderful poem deep from emotion..nice start..keep up the good job..welcome to the site....10

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Fiona Davidson 05 May 2009

Brilliant write Cemya...great imagery...thank you...10+++

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Cemya Barnillo

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