Tuesday, February 26, 2008

I'M A Wappofee Idiot Comments

Rating: 3.0

Sweet bird come back to me
Sea glass cuts my rosy cheeks, I miss my tears

I wonder the dark city streets with my snow white companion
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Greenwolfe 1962 18 August 2008

It begins with the name and ends with a phrase that seems not to be tied to much else in the written piece. Aside from the obvious structural problems, There are problems all over the place. One may be able to draw a special meaning from some lines in the piece, but there is no guarantee that this piece has any at all. I cannot recommend it for a host of reasons. GW62

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