I'M Listening Comments

Will I ever be the lucky one to hear? You can trust me You're the puzzle, and I just want to find that one missing piece to you. i m hearing you. i am listening to yo.. where ar you. trust me....... i want to find you.. very nice poem written in a very original way.. thank you. tony

This unfolds with a natural narrative ease, drawing the reader in, then trading mild suspense for a satisfying answer, yet leaving the story not fully told. Delightfully written, good poet. :) S

Wonderfully penned, and a thoroughly involving read. Quite a thoughtful piece. Much enjoyed. tfs