Sunday, August 7, 2016

I'm Not A Poet But I Try Comments

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poems, they're music to my ears
but I can't seem to write one
I can think of lines
but I can't seem to rhyme them
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Mannda Qinisile
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Chinedu Dike 29 September 2016

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth in good diction with conviction. Beautiful work from a gifted poet. Thanks for sharing Mannda. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 07 August 2016

Wow Qinisile! You're a poet, well planned poem. Thank you for sharing. I really loved the last stanza - I could right about my friends, But they don't deserve the spotlight

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Mannda Qinisile 07 August 2016

thank you so much its actually my first poem I've ever written but now that I see you like it I will write more and publish them Mannda [3

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Kelly Kurt 07 August 2016

Your efforts have paid off, Mannda. Thank you for sharing

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Mannda Qinisile 07 August 2016

its a pleasure I will continue to write and publish my poems Mannda

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