Wednesday, July 11, 2012

I'M Only 21

Rating: 5.0
Im only 21
I heard the news
That I don't have long to live
Instead of crying
Like someone normally would
I look at the doctor and ask how long
After everything that I've been through
And the things going on
I realized how much that I don't care
Hoping that my time will be sooner
then they think
Sara Panicali
Alex Medina 03 August 2012
If I were in the position the poem illustrates, I would probably say and think the same thing, however, I would rather want to live as long as possible, and to spend it with the ones I love. I thought this was great.
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I hope as the other reader said, this is a poem and not a true life incident referring to yourself. If it is true I hope that God and all His angels bless you with every miracle there is for Him to offer you Blessing and love to you
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Captain Cur 11 July 2012
First I hope this is only a poem and that you don't have a terminal illness. The poem says I don't care because I'm giving up and my life stinks anyway. So I say challenge yourself and write each poem as if it is your last and see what comes out!
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