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I'M Up Tonight.... Can'T Even Sleep

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I'm up tonight.... can't even sleep
The Pain's too big for me...
May be you are..... you are in deep
Pain.... or in sleep may be

You want me to forget
Everything you said
You want me to start anew
But, tell me how
Can I ever forget

My life, my laugh and you?
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 23 April 2008

Very poignant! I wish it is not a personal experience!

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Deepti Agarwal 07 April 2008

can do much better... as i always say..work up with yr words...

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Suvrishti Jain 06 April 2008

nice attempt u can do better though little editing needed otherwise gud 1[ :) ]

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