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Waiting For You.... (Trip Back To Sadness)

Rating: 4.5

I'm waiting for you to return
Into my arms at century's turn

It irks me much to see you talk
For hours, with other friends of yours....
But still i love this pain, as it makes you smile,
Oh! that sweet smile of yours...

Huh! sweet pain poison
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Imprisoned mind, dreaming to be free
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Deepti Agarwal 07 April 2008

ahaa...now this is just like the saurabh i knew... its very good.....n touching..thumbs up :)

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Abha Sharma 06 April 2008

you have a touch of literary language fixing oxymorons and other figures of speech... enjoyed this one too

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Marvin Brato 04 April 2008

Sad to think that someone you love left you... or anyone of us! And few still awaits for that someone to return, it maybe painful but soothing too somehow. High marks.

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