I Miss You Poem by Icy rivas

I Miss You

Rating: 5.0


here i am
in this far away land
far form the poeple i love
i flyed away i flyed up above
this place is nice
but being away surely bits
i know i shouldnt cry
but trust me i try
you want me to have a good time
but i wish coming back cost a dime
i wonder if you miss me too
ancle lou dosent even like you
i miss you so
i heart feeling like its in a bow
i am haveing fun
i still wish this trip was done
only 2 more weeks
and i am crying
just like the bathroom leak
but soon enough
i will be back with you
chillen out and playing peek-a-boo

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 August 2008

nice piece and you're very talented, so don't quit.keep on writing seniyorita Icy.

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