Fire Flies

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I Need Your Opinions On This One So Please Comment. - Poem by Fire Flies

this one is for nate. we have been together for a month now. i need to know what you think. i want it to be as good as possible. comment with things that i can do to improve it. please.


I don't think I have ever met someone who was so nice and that actually cared this much about me. I am not that good at explaining things but I hope that you understand that I love you so much. I just want you to know that you are the best thing that has ever happened to me. I wish people could understand that we are good together. We make each other happy. It's not my fault that their blind when it comes to love. People have different opinions sure, but I think that it's wrong to try and keep two who truly love each other from seeing each other, but then don't care when they find someone who is only using them. They don't care about our love or happiness they just care about age. To think of it most adults if you notice the guy is always older. I just wish that they could let us be and not sit and watch us like were babies were more mature then that. Sure we don't always act it, but there are times where people need to act immature. When the times comes to be mature we try our best to be. Everyone makes mistakes at some point in time in their life but baby I promise this isn't one. I love you with all my heart and for ever more will I always give you my heart. Happy one month and I hope that there are more months to come.


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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 21, 2009



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