I Really Miss You Poem by Shreya S Kottaram

I Really Miss You

Rating: 3.3


I saw you
and started to be you
you all were my best friend in my life
I cannot live without you and I will not
'cause I love you

one day you fired on me
which made me broke into pieces
always, we had fights; but not like this
we broke apart; and myself heart broken
'cause I cannot live without you
'cause I truelly love you

Tuesday, November 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
all my feelings.......
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhimanyu Kumar.s 13 November 2017

All your feelings fine, more intensity would bring flow more. Nice start

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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 09 November 2017

wonderful poet.. write more poems i am waiting to read ok and message me

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