I Really Want Us To Last Forever.

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Happy cause I have you,
scared cause I dont want to lose you,
sad cause your not understanding me,
greatful cause your at lest trying,
mad cause you dont sometimes relize what you do,
upset cause I really want you to,
hoping and wondering if your going to change,
waiting to see if you will,
thinking of where my life with you will go,
hoping you will change cause I love you so,
hoping someday you will relize what I've said,
mostly hoping this will all change so we stay together,
cause I really want us to last forever.

August 26/ 2008

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Melvina Germain 20 October 2008

You really paint a picture of longing here, happy & scared showing insecurity and concern. Part of being in love is having trust and when one has trust in a loving relationship, then they no longer have concern. Excellent write Samarah, I enjoyed the read.

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