Tuesday, June 7, 2011

I Remember Comments

Rating: 5.0

I remember as if it were just yesterday
When I gazed the room and saw her face
A light shone through the window, but it was dark outside
Was it a figment of my imagination, or a trick of the light
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Gerard McLaughlin
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 June 2011

Great poem. Rich in imagery and style. Wonderfully conceived. Liked it. I rated it 10/10. Please read and write my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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