Thursday, March 6, 2008

I Saw Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

a tremble in the hand out-stretched
her eyes avert and stay astray
afraid of noticement hoping to be noticed
should i give her the poem i've written for her?
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Sebastien St. Fellmore
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.Kathryn Van Atta 06 March 2008

This is amazing Just what I'm feeling... You're a very good poet

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