I Saw Me Die Poem by Broken Shell

I Saw Me Die

Rating: 5.0


Conviction

by the conscience in me.

But it can't blame

if it's not there.

So far away now that I can't even see.

And too long gone

for me to care.

I saw me die (I tried to live)

I saw me fly (above what I can't give) .

I saw me in the fire.

I felt you in oblivion.

I see me in the liar.

I saw me die, it's gone!

I saw me die (I tried to live)

I saw me fly (above what I can't give) .

I saw me die, I saw me fly,

I, I, I, I, Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 03 January 2010

I went through similar experience some time ago, well penned, great job! keep it up! 10+++

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