Saturday, November 28, 2015

I Saw Wonderful Vistas Today - Comments

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I saw wonderful vistas today -
we went to movies in Latvia,
levitation for half an hour
without any problem then.
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Liza Sud
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Daniel Brick 26 December 2015

What a dream! First it gives you liberation in levitation during you are free of gravity, totally free to move at your own sweet rhythms, BUT then the warning the sea is full of corpses. Wow! The Dream gives then take3s away. Your reflection on the Dream in the last stanza has haunted for some time. The two MUSE poems started as a way of responding to that last stanza but changed slowly into the MUSE poems because I could not find words to express my appreciation of that stanza. I'm still thinking it through!

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Chuy Amante 30 November 2015

levitation or levity? a real long flight or laughs with brevity?

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