Friday, July 11, 2008

I Shot The Sky Comments

Rating: 4.3

I saw the land, I saw the plains
I took a needle, and injected it into my veins
Starry eyed was I for a while
Until I saw that the sky stretched on for miles
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Luca Doss
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Greenwolfe 1962 07 September 2008

The title didn't match the poem, so right there I thought there might be a problem. I can't recommend the poem for that reason. If a poem is not clear enough to have the title match its content. Ther meaning is not clear either. GW62

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Egi David Perdana 26 July 2008

I think is a real but I don't know it's all long (reffain skypeak song)

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