Thursday, April 28, 2011

I Still Desire You Comments

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God I still desire you to come intomy house ans watch me while I sleep
God I still desire you while I will inthe streets alone to keep me Company
God I still need iou to bless me everyday while I pereform my tasks
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Aldo Kraas
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Manolo Del Toro 28 April 2011

Oh my you are getting progressively worse, you don't know how to spell and you don't know where to begin or end words. You need to take English bozo, before you can write poetry. Can you imagine, over 11,0000 things you call poetry, can you imagine all the mistakes?

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