christopher murphy

I Stood And Watched....

Rating: 5.0
Unable to offer any directions,
i stood and watched her drift away.
Tacking her way across the ocean,
with a heart shaped sail.
Being a journey i know too well,
i will not unfurl my sail yet again,
to travel the tides of emotion.
I wished her luck and happiness
on her journey,
as she disappeared from view
hoping that her next dawn
would be her first
Marieta Maglas 06 June 2009
Couples dissolution idea, dictated by society (the boat and the sea) is extremely painful and, sometimes, all we can do is to stay and watch. Apparently there is no solution.We need to search it. Wonderful poem.10+
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Ridge Cahill 05 June 2009
Awesome - my kind of write in every way, the emotion, the word choice, the unbridled honesty - all of it!
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a touching write..departing a love is indeed painful
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Shashendra Amalshan 05 June 2009
yes a moving, touching one indeed sir..I felt it to the core...nice...10+++ see you regards shan
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Lynda Robson 04 June 2009
A lovely haunting write Chris, I like the part about travelling the tides of emotion, well penned 10 Lynda xx
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