Its Over.. Poem by christopher murphy

Its Over..

Rating: 5.0


i see your lips moving
yet i hear no voice
i see your eyes looking
yet see no emotion
i feel your breath upon my face
it feels so cold

you touch me
yet i feel no contact
i stand silent
paralysed with hurt and pain

inside im dying

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

I guess we all feel like this some time in our lives.

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Sage of Time 11 August 2008

its so dark...i love it!

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Cassie Trout 09 August 2008

Such a sad poem, yet all your poems are sad..Do you think maybe you look to deep?

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James B. Earley 07 August 2008

A pained portrait of a place we've all reluctantly been!

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