Jorly Mae Adanza

I Think I'M In Love - Poem by Jorly Mae Adanza

It looks like paradise
It smells like roses,
Whatever it is, I think I'm in love...

It sounds like peace
It feels like shooting stars
But then, my love for you will never end..

When we are together,
It tastes like chocolates, full of sweet.
You and I will be together..

Comments about I Think I'M In Love by Jorly Mae Adanza

  • (10/19/2011 8:50:00 AM)

    Your poem is well written and the choice of words are expertly done to use the sensory words to describe the love of your life. Congrats. However, the sweet there should be changed to sweetness to give its final luster. A+++
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 15, 2011

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